Open Poetry #22 |
Typical? NOT! |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Typical....NOT! Certainly not you... Eyes that shine as bright as stars Smile that is as large as the earth. Looks that make one look twice... Thoughts that ...well.... Linger.. Typically you is who you are... Unique, caring, compassionate and ever honest. Loving all that is her world... Loving all that is....simply all... Wishing upon the moon to carry the burdens of many... Simply hoping to let us know... She cares....cares and cares.. Some more... That is who you are... Our Sun... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this is sweet. a lovely poem of admiration and respect, acknowledgement of the One who truly cares, the bringer of all life |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a beautiful dedication to our loving Son of God who will always guide us with innocent, timeless love! (sigh) I think you should consider posting in Spiritual, sweet friend, you write of His loving grace so well, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What a beautiful tribute to such a deserving light amongst us... She does spread her sunshine all over these blue pages... ~ bright sunshiny hugs Lyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is truly one of your best. You do tributes about as well as you o romance, that is to say perfectly. Thai is certainly beautiful and fits the sun shiny one to a T. I love it utterly utterly utterly. You really are a superb writer. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
And never a typical write from you, either. Enjoyed this one, Sir! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent tribute dear Magnus, and oh, so very true!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And until I got to the part that said "she" I thought this was about me?...Oh well, great poem however, like most of yours are! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A fitting tribute. Nicely done. |
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