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Awaiting Completion
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Awaiting Completion |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Awaiting Completion A poem left undone Its not old nor new Few lines scattered A date not yet due Much like the fruit Removal of peeling Adding to the taste Flavour and feeling Colours and shape Adding to quantity It begins its growth Its much like a tree The young saplings Or fruit on the vine As a poem undone All grow given time Outline then to text All sections in part Spreading as a tree Branches of a heart In adding of verses Its never a deletion Its a poem growing Awaiting completion Hope By Hope ©2002 |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Hope I have many such poems awaiting completion. Nice work. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Hope, this is soooooo wonderfully true, I have many poems I started at one point but never completed because I didn't know how to end it at the time! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love the feel of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The young saplings Or fruit on the vine As a poem undone All grow given time Oh how true!! Enjoyed this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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