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With Tongue in Cheek
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With Tongue in Cheek |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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With Tongue in Cheek I’ve closed my eyes on some surmise I cannot touch its realize. It slips from underneath my hand With constant flow of time and sand The juxtapose impedes the flow Constant often forgets hello And so I go from end to end And cannot seem to round the bend. It seems to me a lonely sail Jonah swallowed by the whale. And I’m afraid when said and done That one and one is only one We all lean out the window frame To set a purpose to our aim But still it stays within my head We really sleep a single bed. But let us say we could move in It’s two to one we’d live in sin.  [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-26-2002 10:44 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Gloriously decadent of you to pen this Sy, but I liked it a lot. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
As usual oh verbal one...great work |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - thankyou for the smiles this morning. Well done!! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Smiling.....again you delight us. Good morning. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Morning SY~ another lovely, with your wisdom... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Glad you enjoyed.  Toe, Thank you our Puck of the forum. Chris, Your welcone and it's good to smile. Gentle Spirit, Delight is my intent.  Lauren, Thank you my dear. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Are you telling me to puck off?....I'll have you know I haven't played hockey in years........ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would have enjoyed seeing the Cheshire cat, Sy. As it is, I shall have to use my vivid imagination that he is just sitting on the limb with a huge ol' grin on his puss... but if you see him, tell me, okay? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, How did I know you would say that? Sunshine, I see your cat But don't know how to get it to come up on the bottom of my poem. LOL |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
Bravo Signore, Seymour, this is brilliant. I'll be wearing this grin for a while now. Thanks Jason Daniels Practiced in the Art of Perception... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've closed my eyes on some surmise I cannot touch its realize. It slips from underneath my hand With constant flow of time and sand The juxtapose impedes the flow Constant often forgets hello ======================= It seems to me a lonely sail Jonah swallowed by the whale. And I'm afraid when said and done That one and one is only one We all lean out the window frame To set a purpose to our aim But still it stays within my head We really sleep a single bed. But let us say we could move in It's two to one we'd live in sin. ==================================== If reading your poetry were a sin ... I'd let the flames singe me skin The powers that be could throw a fit... Id do it anyway and then say ... the devil made me do it   *Winkiewinkie* Hows about a kiss on the cheek  In the space between now and then |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I'm really loving this one, Sy... There is a big grin on my face right now... ~ hugs from chipmunk grinning like a cheshire cat...LOLLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jason, Thank you for the bravo. JM, How about that kiss on the cheek, Randy just pushed me off my chair to get it. WWRS  Lyra, A grin from you is a pleasure for me. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, I too saw the Cheshire Cat from Alice In Wonderland because he always gives those tongue-to-cheek impressions! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
I enjoyed this...and the responses. But that Toe.. Hmmmm I don't know...LOL Oh...And I liked the cat too!! ;-) Kitty * That which gives light, must endure burning * |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart oh look you did it again, this is wonderful. I’m late again, but truly I have a note explaining why…….. nothing to serious only a migraine, this however brought a smile to my face. As always darling man you write supremely well, and I love this utterly utterly love it. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kitty, Yes Toe is a character but a lovable one. The cat is a first attempt at a gif and was surprised to see it when I came to answer you. Noah, The cat is a first, glad you enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, So sorry to read of your migraine. I hope it leaves soon, Thank you sweet for your reply. and maybe a will help it away. |
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