Open Poetry #22 |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
----------------- Silent we are ----------------- We still kept silent ----------------- Your reasonable considerations ----------------- And our tense state ----------------- Sitting together silently ----------------- Waiting you to say it ----------------- Still silent ----------------- My body trembles from your looks ----------------- Needs the warm from you cute heart ----------------- Still silent waiting you to say it ----------------- I lost my control, I felt Coolness when you asked me to see Deep inside your eyes to say what You wane say ----------------- I couldn’t see your eyes because There was something strange Killing me deep inside ----------------- In the end you say it ----------------- I love you ----------------- I felt the word penetrated my Heart ----------------- And I start crying deep inside Crying and crying silently ----------------- And my heart always says I love You too from my all soul ----------------- At least you say it ----------------- Strange silent, strange looks and Strange feelings ----------------- Silent word ----------------- I love you too Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your secret is out now. And yes, it is time to say those words to the one you love. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
you know, whenever you say those words, it is true no matter what. so you dont have to worry about it not being true. i belive its always there, it just waits to be ackknowledged. Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Those words can move mountains, i know.I'm still waiting myself to hear it from someone, even wrote a poem on it called say that u love me.I love your piece especially beacuse it focuses on the intensity of the raw emotions, which at times like those are too much for words!Great work! |
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Night Shadow Junior Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 41 |
Nothing can make him silent anymore, his heart still full of love which inspire it from your love. Night Shadow |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the peace and comfort of this, true love shines from your golden heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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The Nexious New Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 6 |
your man is great....and that the way love goes Be WARE... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thank you all for ur sweet reply Iam glad that u read mine,,,, Thanx alot Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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