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Lady of the Sea
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Lady of the Sea |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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 Sea nymph of Pacific pleasures Many a man has fallen for you Enticing them with hidden treasures Dressed in crystal azure blue Undulating waves in perfect motion She casts a glance and tides obey Mistress of the vast blue ocean Changing appearance each night and day When she smiles, the sea is fair Her sunlit waves kiss velvet sand Tradewinds blow her silken hair She beckons a lover to take her hand. Tho’ be forewarned of her fickle moods Changing as the skies turn gray Her oceanic attitudes A tempest tossed on stormy day Don’t ever turn your back on her She demands respect; don’t be a fool Seducing waves of blue allure May suddenly turn her tides on you She softly sings her ancient songs Calling her lover from upon the shore She knows his heart to her belongs; That he’ll return to her once more. Bewitching temptress, lady in blue Who can resist your mystical call? Men through the ages have fallen for you Never could one,resist you at all. Poetry is: |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Cheryl I feel honoured to be the first to comment on such an outstanding piece of writing. The picture and the images portrayed through your words were magical. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CSKpoet - wow, a most beautiful maiden of the ocean, and a most beautifully written piece of writing... BC |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Hi! I loved the art so I wrote the poem to the picture. Thanks for the read and kind words..She was fun to write about aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Always a pleasure to read the beauties you pen~ This is magnificient~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Hugs back Marge! thanks for the swet words and smiles and hugs, I always need those..  Koko Poetry is: |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
CSKpoet... You really captured this topic very well with this poem. I love the picture and the poem. Sort of like the Tempest and the Storm... Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! This is spectacular!! Beautifully penned and lovely pic. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Wonderful... ~Tier  "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
thanks for all comments and wonderful support. hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Reminds me of my poem Siren song somewhere in Open 21. I loved this. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
The picture and the poem, both lovely! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellent metaphor and yet a reality in a sense, for those who are bitten by the sea fall to 'her' allure continually. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CSKpoet As smooth as whipped cream and just as tasty. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Aloha ,my friends and poets: I so appreciate your kind comments. This one is special to me as well...I adore the ocean and loved this painting. aloha with warmest regards to all, Cher Poetry is: |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I love nymphs and I love mermaids so so much, this is my favorite of yours yet, I just have to add this to my library because it is so magically beautiful! (kiss on cheek) Outstanding, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and if you love mermaids, I wrote a poem titled "Tiffany Mermaids" on Open you might like! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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