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Beyond Today.....
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Beyond Today..... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Beyond today Yet….before tomorrow In that place one goes to share a dream, to weave the imagined mind. Superman had such a place Yes…cold, desolate, and secure. Where he dreamed in his life of power and worldly worry. Imagine the fears of knowing that Life goes on, even as the mind rests and resides in that place between today and tomorrow…. Living in a world of crystal and ice.. A palace carved by the hands of Immortality … far beyond the thoughts of Sampson….Delilah… No shearing of flowing locks from the head of steel. If only a world had a savior Flying past the speed of an atomic bullet into the reaches of far space and near light. Catching damsels, crooks, making the world a place where fear hides and happiness smiles In a place…between today….and tomorrow.. Somewhere after yesterday |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
This is beautiful *grabs talent and runs away* I suppose we all need a hero in this world of villians. Beautifully spoken. [This message has been edited by elfin_tigress (08-25-2002 08:52 PM).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bary, there's a little superman in all of us. We just have to tap into it.... This is fine writing  |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Da da da da da da! Truly, we all do have a bit of superman in us. (total agreement wth balladeer) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Yes, and today is always a good day to begin, we just need a few tomorrows to put our super powers together! (smiles) This is beautifully touching, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And I'll be Lois Lane... A beautifully written poem, Barry...  ~ hugs from superchipmunkLyra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, great stuff! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
In a place…between today….and tomorrow.. Somewhere after yesterday Love this!! Well done sir!!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it! 1derful! What an idea! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Like a plea from the heart. I love this one Magnus! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."In a place...between today...and tomorrow Somewhere after yesterday." That is awesome writing---I keep reading these two lines over and over... You are a super man! Linda |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
you are so very good.. love it beautiful and clever write ~~ Connie ~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mm, this is wonderful. Sandra |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Barry you won it with the Superman being in it. But you really did write a wonderful piece. This falls under what I would consider a true treasure. Thomas oh the rogue part of me wanted to run when it saw the Superman. LOL |
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