Open Poetry #22 |
Lingering Taste (20 or Less) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy...the devil (you) made me do this... Succulent sweet taste as touches linger the lips and waning fires dance the night of passionate fruits savored once…..more [This message has been edited by Magnus (08-25-2002 07:53 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Delicious in 20 words or less. Great Job! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart I hear the words ripple though my soul, how well you know love darling heart. And how beautifully you display its grace, excellent writing stunningly well written the way it flows from beginning to end in such sweet perfection. I love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly. You are always brilliant at these 20 or less darling heart and this is exquisitely written This is simply gorgeous writing well done, As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my!! Yummy write!! Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, you always write such gorgeous twenty or lesses along with your epic ballads of chivalry, this is superb, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
wow... |
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