Open Poetry #22 |
PRIDE |
Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
~ PRIDE ~ I stand before you, stripped of all pride. Trying to mask, many teardrops cried. Willing you to feel, my passion within. Wanting you to see, more than a friend. Silently begging, for your touch to live. Needing much more. You can't seem to give. Two hearts are needed, to replace my pride. ...AND... Standing before you, my pride can't hide. * That which gives light, must endure burning * [This message has been edited by Kitty** (08-25-2002 01:30 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'Silently begging, for your touch to live.' Being too silent perhaps? Well written longing. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Words of want, beautifully portrayed...Kitty ~ lots of hugs Lyra |
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