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There is No Darkness Here (repost)
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There is No Darkness Here (repost) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
There is no darkness here only the twilight of another day softly spoken night words of love are all you’re allowed to say. Bring your heart into this quiet and lay down upon my breast breath slowly and enjoy the solitude of this rest. Worry not about the morrow it will be there when you wake put yourself into my hands you give and I will take. Give me your harried worries give me your day of stress I’ll take your cares and stroke them, soothe them with my caress. In perfect harmony, we’ll sit and wait til your soul is eased then with your smile, I’ll know that you have been well pleased. |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
LOVED this... facaded write. nice. My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ My goodness ... this is just beautiful~ 'Worry not about the morrow it will be there when you wake put yourself into my hands you give and I will take.' My philosophy exactly ... every giver needs a taker~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love this, as it portrays the gracious beauty of the author so very well. um...I'll be right over!  (well it sounded good to ME!)  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sharon~ unconditional giving.....lovely stated...warmly welcomed...  Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, if only ‘twere this easy. Lovely and soothing thoughts of peace and bliss PdV. It felt like crawling into a cocoon while I read this. You can never win or lose |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful..... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind comments. This is one of my favorites - thought it would inspire me to write..my writer's block is the size of an iceberg! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Poet deVine - most lovely write.. WRite more, let the iceberg melt.... BC |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Pieces like these really make me feel like perfection does exist in the form of selflessness Very inspiring, that iceberg doesn't stand a chance! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh now, this is lovely - smooth as silk. Enjoyed reading - putting it in my library. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- This truly is beautiful, and I can understand why this would be your favorite. I can certainly relate to that iceberg-sized writer's block. I hope it starts melting for both of us VERY soon. Much enjoyed this, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I know about those blocks, and I know about this kind of love. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks for the soothe and the groove, Sharon. Mike |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You truly are a poet divine! By the warm responses this poem has engendered, I am quite certain that the proverbial writer's block of ice is now melting into an azure pool of poetic magic. |
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