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Open Poetry #22

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DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2002-08-24 10:37 PM

The golden dawn of sweet morning
Rising slowly in the east
The sound of the larks singing
As on your image my eyes do feast

Young is the day still
As the west wind blows
The air barely chill
And my love for you freely flows

The sun wears through
It's mighty trek half done
But my love for you
Of gold is spun

The ruddy sunset of 'eve arrives
And the wind gently rustles trees
And my love of you still survives
So to see your smile as the day flees.

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haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

1 posted 2002-08-25 12:15 PM

Young is the day still
As the west wind blows
The air barely chill
And my love for you freely flows

very cozy write..

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

[This message has been edited by haydenjames (08-25-2002 12:16 AM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-08-26 12:37 PM

DragonFang-
This is just beautiful.

   "The ruddy sunset of 'eve arrives
   And the wind gently rustles trees
   And my love of you still survives
   So to see your smile as the day flees."

This left me with a smile on my face.
Very nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-08-26 12:40 PM

Enjoyed reading this Dragon...very nice...James

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