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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-08-24 01:00 PM

Lord Helios gazed on earth below,
from desert sand to mountain's snow,
He smiled upon land's radiant splendor,
awash in blaze from forth his render.

Then evening called unto the sun,
Give way to night, day's time is done,
Let loose the stars, jewels crytalline,
to light the way for vespertine.

Yes, I agree, the sun replied,
I cede the skies to eventide,
For I am tired, my time for sleep;
to leave the earth in Luna's keep.

Shines forth the vastness of the night,
As harvest moon glows golden bright,
Lord Helios yawns, day's curtain drawn,
Until once more, shines forth new dawn.

[This message has been edited by Tim (08-24-2002 01:05 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-08-24 01:03 PM

Tim,
Excellent write, enjoyed every line.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-24 01:20 PM

"Shines forth the vastness of the night,
As harvest moon glows golden bright,
Lord Helios yawns, day's curtain drawn,
Until once more, shines forth new dawn."

YAY!!! Oh Tim, this is wonderful, I LOVE IT!!! Such mythology and beautiful imagery fills your words, I love watching the sunlights curtains slowly lifting here, this is superb, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-24-2002 01:20 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-08-24 01:40 PM

Wonderful! I really liked this, Tim. Thanks for sharing both night and day.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-08-24 01:43 PM

Very well done Tim!
Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

5 posted 2002-08-24 01:57 PM

This is beautiful, Tim!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

6 posted 2002-08-24 03:13 PM

I really love this poem! Great write.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-08-24 03:17 PM

Sir, you've been away far too long...
welcome home,
and thank you for this

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-09-16 06:10 PM

Tim,
A subtle wash of night and day
mythologically/metaphorically
speaking.

Mike

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-16-2002 06:47 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2002-09-16 08:01 PM

Then evening called unto the sun,
Give way to night, day's time is done,
Let loose the stars, jewels crytalline,
to light the way for vespertine

Tim - very nice, enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

The Crimson Knight
Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

10 posted 2002-09-16 09:10 PM

My thought flowed across a similar passage,
enjoyed your expression through your poetry

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2002-09-16 10:10 PM

I don't want to miss any of your postings. Nope! Notta one! I read your poems very slowly, absorbing them into my being, into my mind, and into my heart.

~ Smiles ~
Earth Angel

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