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Swaying Rails....
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Swaying Rails.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The clack of rails in break upon the ribbon steel. The clink of dishes Smell of coffee, bacon, biscuits touch of color in fruit display two hearts..riding rails... Whispering pines flowing by beyond the window reflecting eyes of gleam, eyes of love as touches bring the passion of sway to the minds in wait...of yet a moment... Lost to the sounds, the rocking feel the distant bell of a crossing passed. Into the night, on silver rails Love’s journey rides... A berth for two... Awaiting...anticipating.... Breath flowing upon the fog of sight beyond the scene of silver moon’s beam Oh to ride the rails, feel the sway of passion’s messenger carrying the sensual feel.... As dreams continue the journey and rails sing a lullaby for two.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Wasn't there a movie like this one time...a time when romance was a train ride away...yes, I'm sure there was...or was that real? Enjoyed! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Surely Bogey and one of his flames must have done just this....once...long ago... Or, was I just dreaming again? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
HeHe! A real good dream is worth it's weight in reality my friend. Hmmm...reflecting of a powerful romantic mood here...Me thinks I will say thank you for that soft cooling rain just outside my window. Will read again after my long walk! Wonton and wistful write. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
TD...maybe I need to write a rain poem... Naw....I don't have the headgear, the right costume....or the touch.... So, I'll just dream of rails.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Magnus I don't know if Bogart did one or not, but I do know that I have seen movies where the ride set the mood for passion. Very well done sir. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
GS....Yes, it certainly could do just that. A sailing cruse for two to a deserted Isle.. Or... Let's see...hmmmmmm....watch out, I might get inspired to write again... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Wow, oh my gosh, what a coincidence, before I read the comments I also thought of Humphrey Bogart on certain parts! (smiles) Wow, there you have it, your wonderful words can always spark such wonderful flashbacks, I LOVE IT!!! I wish for this era of classic romance to find its rebirth, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-24-2002 12:56 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Are you taking lessons? LOL Your writing gets better and better. More then enjoyed. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart when you write like this I swear the pages actually sigh with each breathe I take. I can feel the poem, feel each breath of this, the romance laces through this with only the touch you can brush into it. Exquisite writing as always YOU excel darling heart. Truly you get better and better, I love it utterly utterly utterly I’m glad I found this one  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Magnus, You are such a romantic writer. Your pen just exudes sensuality in every word picture you paint. Electra |
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