Open Poetry #22 |
Etoile |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Etoile Everything that has happened before The appearance of her into my life Only serves as the starting point In my quest for completion, Love, may illuminate this journey Etoile, might just shed, such light ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx All I can say is lots of luck, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A quiet comment to the heart I like this... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
wranx a star only lights the heart that sees it. Enjoyed this. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such talented portrayal of the lost boys (Peter Pan)... Very well done. ThisDiamond |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
looking at poem it appears the "might" is unnecessary the light is already on |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Wranx, this is beautiful, I love it! This is a soft plea to the heart hat I hope is answered upon a star, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wranx, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
excuse me, but I think your soul is showing... (and shaking my head at the signiature, with a grin) |
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