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To Touch A Brighter Star
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To Touch A Brighter Star |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Oh, but to touch that brighter star there, shining in a far off galaxy distant in the future. If I could reach past that source of your pain and sprinkle stardust that has floated down from the heavens and blow it gently across the trails that you walk in hopes that perhaps tomorrow your steps could fall lighter so that you might tread softer upon that path within. I would fly straight through the heavens holding your hand to make all of your dreams come true. Dance! Oh how we would dance and the Gods in celestial skies would be jealous when Luna shone her light upon two souls held in harmonies delight. There are stars millions in the universe but yours.... yours shines brighter than those that just hang there clinging........to the darkness. (c)dmsmith 08-23-02 {because I love you....} If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-23-2002 05:12 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is beautiful Donna.  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
T’is very true, These words coming from you, That stars shining with brightness Are brightened by the darkness In which they are found Scattered around. Very interesting Piece Gloom |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ 'There are stars millions in the universe but yours.... yours shines brighter than those that just hang there clinging........to the darkness.' Such original, lovely thoughts~ You always 'touch'~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
GentleSpirit, I enjoyed this so much, as with all your writings. This one particularly though, touched my heart in a special place. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, just the thought of touching a star of my dreams with my Joanna made me smile as such innocent grace fills your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A lovely tender gentle write, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
There are stars millions in the universe but yours.... yours shines brighter than those that just hang there clinging........to the darkness. ----------------------------------------- Donna, this has to be my favourite from you now!! This is outstanding writing... Oh my how I love this piece... You have penned a  Wonderful!! ~Hugs~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - love the gentleness and warthm of this, and love the stardust sprinkled touching... BC |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Rose, thank you. I appreciate it. Gloom, thank you. Marge, glad you enjoyed the lovely thoughts I hold in pen. Hugs. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marti, it pleases me much that this touched your heart. Noah, may all of yours and Joannas dreams come true. Hugs. Sey, thanks and glad you enjoyed. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy you are too good to me. Thank you so much sweet lady you. Bill, seems sometimes the stardust adds the magic touch. Thank you. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
If I could reach past that source of your pain and sprinkle stardust that has floated down from the heavens and blow it gently across the trails that you walk in hopes that perhaps tomorrow your steps could fall lighter Donna - This is a wonderful, piece of work. I love it!! Chris |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna Sometimes love makes it happen...this is certainly a loving poem. Hugs! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Love is beautiful, Donna... and you write of it so very well... ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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Cherokee Child Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 13 |
Mom, I know that this made Bill smile.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hey you......you snuck in there on me..... also....... |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I've often wished I could touch people like this. Well done, Donna.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
I would fly straight through the heavens holding your hand to make all of your dreams come true. Sometimes I wonder if you know how much your love shows in your words and if he knows how lucky he is. May you both be blessed in love. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is the best that I've read from you D. . . it's a testament to just how far you've come. . . beautiful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Elizabeth I believe that each person holds beauty in their own words and I have seen this beauty in your words as well. I thank you for such a lovely comment. SE, gal you do know how to touch, and I thank you. Wow Sven, I am honored at your words. I believe the how far I have come isn't just my poetry......but in my life also. Thank you so very much dear man. Hugs. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A gentle, bright touch, indeed.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This tickles ones heart and leaves a soft dust that lingers, oh how lovely this was! The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Very enlightening and enchanting poem Gentle Spirit, I was struck with awe as I read it over and over again. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Donna, this is so beautiful, and now I have a favourite of yours, as this is your best to date. I've read this 3 times already, and it keeps getting better and better. It's a keeper~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Donna You have painted a masterpiece with your wonderful words. I hope you are well. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very touching sweet lady..... always from you pen to our hearts.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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