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Clover Lace....
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Clover Lace.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Her eyes...open to the gaze of him as shadows played the walls in dance from in the room of glowing dim in want of just....just one more chance. The bliss of sleep that brought to dream a moment whence a moan did come. A rest of eyes before the stream and distant beat of blessed drum. Blissful waiting, yearning soulful fire left to flames upon the open grate. Longing tunes of lyrics sound in lyre singing soft blesses of one’s fate. While still her thought of his she kept till morn did come and pass once more. Where eyes did shine from one’s tears wept in walk of sands on distant shore. A painful mome’ which did expire at strike of time from olden clock. Till ‘gain the ball brings forth desire whence passion’s key invades the lock. To dance, dance, into waning light on toes of dreams in flowing gowns. ‘Pon clover fields and winged flight one smiles, one wiles,and never frowns. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry This was simply stunning and I have to say I have always wanted to wear one of those beautiful flowing gowns but never did. Oh well, at least I can dream through your wonderful words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, A beautiful write and an enjoyable read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry "To dance, dance, into waning light on toes of dreams in flowing gowns. ‘Pon clover fields and winged flight one smiles, one wiles,and never frowns." Sounds like a dream place, beautifully told. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
You have such a beautiful way with words... I enjoyed this very much. DeaDiAmore |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, I love it, how I wish I could flounder in those fields like in the good old days all the time! (big hugggsssss) This is very wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
A real beauty from you, Barry. I wish I could write this week, but nothing is happening. This reminds me that I need to keep going, in life, in love, and in writing. Thanks. Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exclamations for the title here...a glorious write...well named. ThisDiamond |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I imagine it must have been hard to wake up from this dream... A wonderful write, Barry.  ~ hugs and dreamsLyra |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Magnus- Very beautifully penned, my friend. I enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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