Open Poetry #22 |
Expose To Me Your Feelings |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Expose to me your feelings Reveal your heart and soul It is my desire to please you So let my heart take full control Devour me at sunset Beneath the warming amber glow Your love has spread like wildfire Touching me more than you could know Seduce me beneath the moonlight Under the bright harvest moon As we gorge on love's sweet nectar We'll sway to our love's tune Caress my body all over Let me feel your tender touch Give me hours of your pleasure Your love could never be too much Whisper to me sweet nothings Tease my lips with your tongue This night of exquisite sensations Has now only just begun I am in motion |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Wow! This is quite erotic Sue. A delight to read. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This time.... has just now...now begun... Your words of passion's flame do flow in firelight dance as love is felt the game of two vice one perchance. Your eyes that dance the gleam of lusting light and stars. Beside the clear of stream to distant red of Mars... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you for reading this Anne and I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much Barry for your stunning words which even made me blush. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Steamy write here Sue .... I need to go take a cold shower after reading this one! Marti |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Ooohhhhh...I love this, this is soooooo warm but sooooo romantic too, I love it, you always write true passion and beauty so well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderfully sensual write Sue! Enjoyed the read tonight...oh yes! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Simply sensually beautiful, simply love this!!!! marie Keep counting your blessings |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a wonderfully sensual poem - evokes powerful and exciting feelings - loved it - Paul |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - very romantic read this morning... BC |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Stunningly passionate, great job! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the sensuality in this one, Sue... A lovely love poem... You write your passion so well. ~ hugs from a chipmunk friend"> Lyra |
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