Yawning Through the Dawning--sorry stuck in high gear

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Open Poetry #22

Yawning Through the Dawning--sorry stuck in high gear

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-08-22 04:24 PM

Yawning Through the Dawning

finch slept in today
before he came out to play
seems he waited for the clouds to part
so sun could give his heart a start
and set his feet to “tap and go”
like my weed-eater
before the mow

and come alone
is what finch did
I guess the others
are still hid

he came to dine
in peace and still
all feathered fine
and dressed to kill

©August 22, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

1 posted 2002-08-22 06:07 PM

I liked this. good ryhme pattern. quick flow..makes you want to go back and read it again.

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

2 posted 2002-08-22 06:08 PM

oh, and I also very much liked the title!

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