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Two Silhouettes |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Two Silhouettes Two silhouettes dancing while darkness inaudible. Their graceful steps, their tender movements, as though they're floating in space. Sounds of laughter fill the air, dispelling fluttering whispers to echo through this night like they're a million light year galaxies away. Face to face, eyes to eyes, reading each others thought waves, scanning their aspects like an ultrasound. Silence overcomes them, as they embrace eternally like tomorrow is a pretense. Two silhouettes in love connected within the moment, reaching to grasp the essence of their simplistic selves. Holding out ones hand to the other in delight, ready to share a journey of two separate souls connecting in passion. ~This is a revised version of "Two Silhouettes" that I wrote back in 1999, and had posted it in Open 1. I originally wrote this about two friends who I felt were very much in love.~ Thanks for reading  |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
And a very romantic dedication to your friends! Enjoyed aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, I have missed you so so much, sweet friend, I miss talking with you and am so happy you re-posted this gem as I would have missed it! (kiss on cheek) This is a feeling I share with my Joanna and I hope soon I will meet her for real, sooooooon beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-22-2002 04:36 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lost Dreamer Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Awww Ria, the original was great, but the rewrite is even better. Way to go girl! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i think i remember this, gloria. funny how things can seem when they're not. but today i feel brand new embracing a dream come true. two sillhouettes is the sum. becoming one. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Heh Ria, it has been a while since I last read your words, beautifully written, hope all is well. E-mail me if you get the chance. Face to face, eyes to eyes, reading each others thought waves, scanning their aspects like an ultrasound. Silence overcomes them, as they embrace eternally like tomorrow is a pretense. The sum of the angles of that rectangle is too monstrous to contemplate! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Gloria - I'm not sure if I'm happier to see your poem or you yourself posting.. The poem is great.. Seeing you here is wonderful..  |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
This is the first time i'm seeing this, well, since i'm new here, but allow me to express my sincere admiration for this piece. It describes to me, living in one eternal moment, of sheer bliss. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
CSKpoet: Thanks for reading, and replying, glad you enjoyed. ~Smiles~ Mistletoe Angel: Thanks for your reply, I also miss chatting with you. I hope you are able to meet Joanna soon, I know that would be a dream come true for you. ~Smiles~ Seymour Tabin: Thanks for enjoying, I appreciate your replies. ~Smiles~ Munda: Thanks for visiting me in this poem, I'm glad you found it enjoying. ~Smiles~ Doreen: Yes, you do remember this. ~Smiles~ I have noticed as of late, how happy you are, and that can only make me happy also. {Hugs} brian madden: Hey Brian, nice to see you again, it sure has been awhile since we've chatted. Thanks for enjoying this poem, I will most definately E-mail you. ~Smiles~ Nan: Thank you, for making me feel special in a simple kind of way. Your reply literally brought tears to my eyes. This place has done so much for me, and I will always feel at home here. ~Smiles~ Gabriel Frost: First let me say welcome to Passions. ~Smiles~ I am sure you will love it here. Thanks for reading, and enjoying this poem. ~Smiles~ Thanks Again Everyone I really appreciate, ~Ria~ |
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