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I Won't Want
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I Won't Want |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I Won't Want I won't forget you ever. I've fit you into my puzzle, the next to the last piece, waiting for tomorrow's. I have been betrayed, tainted over the years, overdosing on a one-sided love, walling myself in. I have played Hide 'n Seek once too often, not finding myself until now. Time was my enemy, seconds turning to minutes, hours to days, days to a year too long. Words became my want, romance my desire, desire in need of loving, and then it happened. I felt the kiss of a lifetime and I won't want for love anymore. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice writing, To not to want, such an enchanting thought Even more enchanting when real. Gloom |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
"the kiss of a lifetime" exciting! love the puzzle analogy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - I'm happy that you have found it... BC |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I love happy endings - or should I say "beginnings?" Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart OH MY! This is seriously excellent stunningly well written, when you write and you incorporate the truth laced through with your perfect wisdom its incomparable. I love this darling heart it really is a beauty I utterly utterly utterly love this it is exquisite. Thank you for you, you are very special   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I felt the kiss of a lifetime and I won't want for love anymore." Wow, Maureen, that is wonderful! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
PG...dreams are made better when they come true..otherwise I enjoy the pretending... thank you for the words... M SAG..thank you for stopping by..I do think a kiss can say offer things... BC...one never knows for sure if they have found anything...sometimes I think I just want to believe it true...*s nice that you are back..you were missed by many  M Nightshade..I am not sure which it is..but I know there are changes on the horizon  thanksMarsha, dear heart..as always I love to read you reading me *s...it won't be long now..time just speeds ahead. hugsssss M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey, how did you sneak in there Midnite..I was just responding and noticed you after I posted...thank you I am in a good mood..do NOT ask me why...I don't even think I know the answer!M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, there are many changes on the horizons and I'm so happy for you as while my heart goes out to your past sorrows I know everything will become bright for you! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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