Open Poetry #22 |
Just Want You |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“JUST WANT YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ We met a while ago near the bay, held your hand in mine softly… Felt a heart beating with mine, it talked to me affectionately… Heard the surf kissing the sands, watched the gulls flying around… Didn’t take me very long it seems, to fall in love with you I found… Try it sometime with someone, go somewhere special with her… You’ll see exactly what I mean, magic it will be there together… Now I know I just want you, pleasures felt beyond delight… The way you taught me sensually, about loving you through the night… ~~~~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very romantic, very nice. As always, I enjoyed. :-) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I would just die to share it with my Joanna and take her out for the time of her life, I only wish she lived closer as all I want is her! (sigh) This is very romantic and sweet, dearest friend, God Bless You, I'm so happy to see you again after your 2-day trip, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Mr. Romance has returned... You were missed... This is wonderful...and not just because it contains the word 'magic'! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Man! are you sooooo smoooooth The Sinatra of Poetry, Bill. What could be cooler than that? *smile* jeff |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is so beautiful and romantic, Bill. You have a warm and sensitive heart that shows,NO, it GLOWS, through your poetry. Thank you, for always being YOU, and for letting us know you just a bit through your words. I always feel as if I am in the same room with you, a dear friend. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill This was so very lovely and very romantic. Such a lucky lady to have such beautiful words written about her. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Try it sometime with someone, go somewhere special with her… You’ll see exactly what I mean, magic it will be there together… I would have to agree, very recently. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
wonderfully romantic and great advice enjoyed Cher Poetry is: |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
not only does this read beautifully, it exhales beauty a stunning read Sammie ^i^ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy oh my! This is simply one of the best I’ve seen in a long time. I truly don’t get here enough but there is only so much time in the day. I’m glad I didn’t get to miss this utter beauty it is extremely special the writing is perfect and again you have written pure gold. Beautiful work really beautiful. Romance at its finest Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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