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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Unstrung you filter into my mind each morning to start my day, a touch to feed my dreams each season holding fast, captured in mind melting the cold, blending the warm, leaving me cloaked in you another year will soon elapse and I still remain the same someone whose fantasies echo each night wondering when and if I chance to meet my fantasy of you, before tomorrow's gone. M tify "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - this is so soft, I can feel it from here... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Evening Bill...yes, I am in a soft mood ...the heat allows you to do nothing much but think *s hugs M |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
You know, i always make it a point to read NT and beat with the same heart as the words. I swear to you, tho, M, that fantasies can become reality if you get the muses votes. Maybe you just aren't greasing the right palm.....~rib~ soft moods suit your writing well, good buddy. ~hugs from boat of us here~ D & J |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoy your soft thoughts. It is always good to read you. I feel there is so much in between the lines, written by such a cautious, but giving heart. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart This is simply one of your, I truly don’t get here enough at the moment but there is only so much time in the day. I’m glad I didn’t get to miss this utter beauty it is extremely special the writing is perfect and again you have written pure gold. This is simply exquisite writing, YOU are an inspiration to me and your writing I utterly adore, I always have done so, it holds such quality. Beautiful work really beautiful. Positively wonderful darling absolutely perfect I love it utterly utterly.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
you filter into my mind each morning to start my day, a touch to feed my dreams This is beautiful. Just a touch is all it takes to feed your dreams. Very nice writing. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ahhhh, tenderly woven with a soft, yet powerful sense of longing Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ You write the tender like no one else~ Lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do know how it feels, and this is so beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A lovely soft write, enjoyed. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, I often muse on this same subject. Lovely. Sandra |
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