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ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

0 posted 2002-08-21 06:07 PM

~ Finding a Way (to each other) ~

I see the dismal deep in your eyes
cheek-trail tears and unwept cries
clouded visions filled with self doubt
myths of reliance dance hither, about

like a wound that seeps thru dressing
myriad prayers to elicit a lessening
and yet the result is awe-inspiring
a life long love: that is our desiring

exactly what you wanted, you needed
such courage to ask Him to intercede
some days to come, our hearts to bind
glorious treasures we have yet to find

~ ~ ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-08-21 06:30 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write such wonderful sensitive and lovely writes and I know with a heart as yours you are bound to find true happiness forever! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

2 posted 2002-08-21 06:47 PM

so much is said in these three stanzas, so much..

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-08-21 07:12 PM

Jeff darling heart you lift your voice onto the wings of angels and you sing into this soul of mine. Sometimes your writing is great sometimes it is powerful, but sometimes it nestles in my soul, as this did. You have such a way of breathing in my spirit and returning me a breath of wonder, is it any wonder you are loved by me? And as for Krissy she thinks you are the bees knees, she’s right darling heart you are.

I love this it is simply perfect and I’m keeping it here in the warmth of my soul which on nights such as this whispers your name in delight.

I love it utterly utterly utterly.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-08-21 07:19 PM

Jeff! You seem never to waste one word,
one sentence..or one stanza!
Everything has been so well chosen and perfectly placed.
Wonderful write and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-08-22 12:31 PM

It looks as though you are on a happy Avenue....

hugsssss

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-08-22 04:54 AM

wow, I can see me in this a lot. I suppose I'm just missing the Him part...which is crucial. I'm working on it. Nice write.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

7 posted 2002-08-22 09:04 AM

*sigh* this one needed no explaining. Simply lovely Jeff.

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