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Cupids Humor |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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Oh, crazy Cupid, what have you done to me? I am blind I cannot see. I cannot look right or left for I lose sight. However, the beautiful scene that sits before me does deserve my full attention. Oh, Cupid, you are a sneaky one. Here I was sitting all alone then you drive this arrow of love deep into my heart. Now I am frantic and in a frenzy over a woman. A WOMAN! That is right a woman, not a car or a boat or some macho manly toy, but an elegant, sexy woman Cupid, answer me this are you accurate in your shot? That is what I was afraid of hearing. Oh well, there goes my nights out with the guys. By Thomas Goldsworthy (The Cupids arrow goes BINK! when it leaves the bow.) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
not only is this to cute, it is also very true in content. Very good writing, I enjoyed it. *s* somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Very true thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed the read today very much! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
how sweet...helen |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well this is a stereotypical 'man' poem if ever I read one  Loved that last verse...too, too cute! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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