Open Poetry #22 |
Enchantment |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Enchantment When moonlight combs her golden hair And bathes the room with mystic air Each movement burning in delight Of skin adorned in pearly white When sparkling blaze has touched his eye From heaven’s candle in the sky And laid a luminescent glaze Across a lover’s ravished gaze Both hearts succumb to moon’s embrace 'Til dawning purples take its place Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (08-21-2002 11:17 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Liz, deep sigh, this is so very beautiful! A lovely write and so well written. Hugs somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah... this is lovely... beautifully written... Regards to you Liz, Sudhir |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
Oh this is so lovely, enchanting places are best when shared with enchanting people, sound as if you made some majical times with this poem P. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You do sonnets so beautifully, Liz. UP to the top with this one. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, such light and imagery always fills your gorgeous words, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Simply enchanting Elizabeth! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, The tender of lovely. Sy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
When moonlight combs her golden hair And bathes the room with mystic air Each movement burning in delight Of skin adorned in pearly white Beautiful Elizabeth!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Liz, this is so beautiful...your pen is flawless! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Another poetic treat from your pen, Liz ~ poetic hugs Lyra |
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