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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Comfort I looked at you and saw myself there a reflection of soul in another comfort in the eyes I saw and in the eyes that finally saw me |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like the simplicity of this, yet the message is profound, not simplistic. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I think I understand this...completely. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, I could use some of that! Very nice.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh He;en, this is beautiful, and may your tears of joy sparkle with that loves pretty face you find comfort in, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
what adoration this makes me feel for your style A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
I like what this says, so simply, I hope you didn’t have to wait long for him to notice you P. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice poem, Helen. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Helen this just reached out and spoke to me....how well I know this feeling. Well done. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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