Open Poetry #22 |
Controlled By Our Emotions |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
The gentle touch of your hand A delicate kiss on the cheek I now have you at my mercy For your love is what I seek Sensual encounters by the firelight As two souls become entwined Our hearts now beat in unison A truer love you cannot find Tender kisses beneath the moonlight Fevers peak beside the sea As the power of love consumes us I will give you all of me In the afterglow of love Safe and warm in your embrace My finger begins to travel Around the curve of your face Controlled by our emotions Imprisoned within your arms Mesmerised by your smile Captivated by your charms I am in motion |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very, very nice...especially this stanza: Tender kisses beneath the moonlight Fevers peak beside the sea As the power of love consumes us I will give you all of me Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sue, what a wonderful image for our cold winter mornings. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue... A really good one here I really liked the last stanza...Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-20-2002 08:08 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue - Your love poems are soooo romantic and descriptive. I just love reading them and share them with my Hon. Must be signs of life springing up in your garden! Hope all is well in your part of the world. Hugs, Marti |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo beautiful, I think it is impossible to live a life all based on logic, as it is truly our dreams and desires that keep us going! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely poem of romance and love... You are so good at these, Sue... ~ many chipmunky hugs Lyra |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue lovely, romantic piece Sue. Betty Lou Hebert |
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