Open Poetry #22 |
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Fringes Of Reality |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I walked away so lonely That tears did not work In steps so hollow That nothing followed I climbed the mountain of despair Into the fringes of reality Looking into the horizon As piercing eyes met mine In a chill of an awakening In the whispers of thoughts I knew I was still special For one tear told me so D.Lester Young (08/17/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To see one's reflection of worth in a tear is to continue going on... |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I relate to the first verse all too well... this is an excellent write... just painful to read. *S* Well done! |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
soul searching..can be the most painful, yet in the end, when as you put it, you have that awakening, it's also the most fulfilling thing in the world. |
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