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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Willie-boy silly boy was drunk as could be He hardly could walk and barely could see, Stumbling on down the sidewalk best he could He wandered into the wrong neighborhood. Lillie-girl silly girl was stoned so well Walking was flying and she couldn’t tell Turn a trick get a fix and fly some more You did not have to think to be a whore Millie-girl frilly girl was so proper Driving into town just for a popper, They keep her body trim and life style active, Now the uppers were how she had to live. Silly boy paused to relieve his too full bladder Silly girl watched cause that did not matter She chatted to him while he was midstream, Frilly girl saw them and just had to scream. Officer Sue was having a rough night Heard the screaming and thought it was a fight, Unluckily for Sue she wasn’t too far Turned the corner and ran into her car. Frilly disheveled spilt her pills on the seat Willie was still there watering the street Officer Sue had to call in some back up Having a tough time just keeping from crack up All were arrested and taken downtown Locked in cells making great protesting sound, Officer Sue returned back to her beat Just another night out on city streets Gloom Now if anyone believes any of this Please contact Swampland Reality, I’ve got a nice deal for you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor Gloom Not to believe but to enjoy and I did. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very creative : ) ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Seymour Tabin, A wise man then, glad you at least enjoyed I have a nice bridge if you are interested Thank you, Zinsser, Just a little silliness spewing out, Glad you liked it. Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What's not to believe? but spare me the swamp deal...I think I've bought enough "mud" for one lifetime!  Truly tho, this is clever stuff here. I liked the sing-song children's rhyme feel of this that contrasts the loss of innocence you portray with your characters here. Like a perverse Dr. Seuss or something. Very clever work, you.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and no one believes the streets are like this? Odd...since I'm kind of a "Sue" myself, I will say that things are really just this silly out there. You gotta laugh at life, I guess. Yeah, I have a few stories, but only tell them in company of police officers...seems they are the only type of people that can relate. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
What a hoot. It's a good thing officer Sue didn't shoot...Paul |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Serenity Blaze, Suess Perverse, I’ve been called worse, Thank you, thank you for your time In responding to my rhyme. Thank you, passing shadows, I agree this could have happened, I’ve witnessed many a strange thing in the streets On a hot summer night seems the sanity is fried away, Pleased you enjoyed. Thank you, Paul Wilson, It’s amazing how few times the police do shoot, I’d have to fight the temptation to ‘blow them away’ just for gross stupidly. Glad you liked Gloom [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (08-19-2002 06:47 AM).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Mother Goose doesn't have anything over you! *chuckle I enjoyed the silliness. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, MFFF As you would know about the birds I will accept your judgment, Pleased you enjoyed. Gloom [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (08-19-2002 10:24 AM).] |
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