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Warming The Edges
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Warming The Edges |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Warming The Edges what is it you see of me that others cannot see skin that is so thin that has been dried up by degree underneath thinnest armor is still a heart in pain but a heart is still a heart and here it still remains I feel myself pour on you like the liquid flowing tide with words I dare not speak of and better that I hide but if I speak the words or not you listen and you hear for two are not so lonely where another is drawn near so I shall keep my silence in words that can not be said to lay them at water’s edge where the warmth of sun has spread I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this write a lot Cold hands means a warm heart |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
touching and wise. I like the implication of listening with the mind. Warm Regrads Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
When you find one who can hear the words you do not speak, you are lucky indeed. Nicely written, Helen  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - lovely your words in this write. Things said are many... BC |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Silence is sometimes not golden.... Speak up Or is it just to late.....? Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (10-11-2002 09:43 AM).] |
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