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someonespecial
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0 posted 2002-10-10 05:31 PM



It's up to you to paint this dream
for time is always fleeting,
fashioned out of words that shine
and keep this one heart beating.

Disguised I am when need be then
to make my way towards you.
It's awfully hard sometimes to be
a special one, it's true.

Eye to eye and face to face
when lips touch lips, I learn
to hold onto the moment's feel
whenever, you I yearn.

Yes...
It's up to you to paint this dream
of cabin framed in snow.
As day fades into nighttime,
thoughts of you, begin their flow...


© Copyright 2002 someonespecial - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-10-10 05:36 PM


And this is how it should be for someone
special from "Someonespecial"  Very nice,
and welcome to Passions...Enjoy!

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-10-10 05:50 PM


I am sure that your someone special will enjoy this very much.  It is a pleasure to have you at Passions.  

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2002-10-10 06:07 PM


Special thoughts from someone special...

Welcome to passions!

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-10 07:56 PM




Yay!!! And you are someone very special whose dreams deserve to come true, sweet friend, this is a very lovely debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your most special words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-10-10 08:00 PM


Welcome! Welcome! Welcome! To your new home away from home!

What a lovely poem of love, written about someone special by someone special!

Earth Angel

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6 posted 2002-10-10 08:06 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Very beautiful first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-10-10 08:07 PM



Boy do you have your stuff together!  Posting first, getting to know us, then coming in with a wonderful first post...Welcome to Passions!  I know you're going to enjoy yourself around here!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

*Stubby*
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8 posted 2002-10-10 08:20 PM


May all your dreams come true to you
J

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9 posted 2002-10-10 09:21 PM


Lovely first post. Welcome to Passions! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2002-10-11 10:34 AM


Such beautiful poetry to gift us.  Welcome to Passions. I look forward to ready more.
ThisDiamond

someonespecial
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since 2002-10-10
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11 posted 2002-10-15 11:21 AM


thank you for your welcoming, I have enjoyed reading here for some time now.

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