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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2002-10-10 04:52 PM


Magpie like, collects
sparkling gems of precious hope
feathers barren nest

Soft and warm flows love
words strung out to serenade
harmless and secure

Young in heart and voice
opinions strong can drive her
loving, gentle heart

Sheltered by the wind
in loving arms, power grows
willow she will bend

strong and sure of heart
the epitome of right things
organised, at peace

Golden voice of charm
Hidden deep a merry wit
loyal and true blue

In the sanctuary
protected by perfect love
poems blossom forth

Wit and wisdom sure
crosses bridges as they come
always wears a smile

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-10-10 04:57 PM


I like it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
2 posted 2002-10-10 07:45 PM




Only one person comes to me mind: M A R G E

I'm right am I?????

Keth, I know you'll be going home soon. I want to wish you a good and safe trip home and don't forget to say HELLO to the boot-man in Tampa LOL he sure is going to miss you girls.

It was so nice meeting you, take care my friend, who knows maybe someday we'll meet again.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-10-10 08:57 PM


Gotta ask gotta ask...

we're talking about more than one poet, right?

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2002-10-12 10:15 AM


loner23,
thanks for the response
Sunshine,
yes each senryu is a different poet.

Titia,
Correct one of them is Marge but which one, hmmmm?
I will misss this place too. I fly out today. You take care of your knee and the rest of you and if you email Marsha with your address she will send your lovely red hat back to you.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
5 posted 2002-10-12 02:20 PM



In the sanctuary
protected by perfect love
poems blossom forth


I think this is Marge, am I right?

This is fun

Sheltered by the wind
in loving arms, power grows
willow she will bend


This could be Chipmunk

Young in heart and voice
opinions strong can drive her
loving, gentle heart


Is this Krissy?

Magpie like, collects
sparkling gems of precious hope
feathers barren nest


This sounds to me like Maureen?

strong and sure of heart
the epitome of right things
organised, at peace


This could be Marsha

Golden voice of charm
Hidden deep a merry wit
loyal and true blue


This maybe Balladeer?

Well, I give up, can't find the others

Long way to go home Keth, but you take beautiful memories with you, like I did.

Love you, Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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