Open Poetry #22 |
Is It Foriegn? |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I want to go on about you Because I've read your pages Studied your language Now I want to speak you Fluently and caress Your dialect-ableness Let the words drip nuances Colorful phrases native to Your heart, And let the world see & maybe comprehend The immigration from my Island to where ever you are... I want to go on about you Open the text book of your soul & become inspired to write about Undiscovered places in your eyes What will be uncovered to me? I wonder, even as I delve into Complex areas generally misunderstood By uninterested ones, Fools, tho they be... But as for me, I will go on & on & on About you... ~Tier 10/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (10-10-2002 04:53 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Robin, Read up, and on. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is the language of love! EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well, my honest opinion of this work is I can't get the smile off my face after having read it several times. This is oh, quite special, to say the least. Warm Regards, Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
beautiful as always my friend.. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, yes and yes. This is beautiful. Wish that I could even approach this. ~Ed |
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