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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-10-10 04:51 PM



I want to go on about you
Because I've read your pages
Studied your language
Now I want to speak you
Fluently and caress
Your dialect-ableness
Let the words drip nuances
Colorful phrases native to
Your heart,
And let the world see
& maybe comprehend
The immigration from my
Island to where ever you are...

I want to go on about you
Open the text book of your soul
& become inspired to write about
Undiscovered places in your eyes
What will be uncovered to me?
I wonder, even as I delve into
Complex areas generally misunderstood
By uninterested ones,
Fools, tho they be...

But as for me,
I will go on & on & on
About you...

~Tier
10/02


"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (10-10-2002 04:53 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-10-10 04:58 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-10-10 06:23 PM


Robin,
Read up,
and on.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-10-10 06:48 PM


This is the language of love!

EA

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
4 posted 2002-10-10 07:10 PM


Well, my honest opinion of this work is I can't get the smile off my face after having read it several times.

This is oh, quite special, to say the least.


Warm Regards,
Pat

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-10-10 07:17 PM


beautiful as always my friend..
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
6 posted 2002-10-10 10:59 PM


Yes, yes and yes. This is beautiful.

Wish that I could even approach this.


~Ed

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