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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-10-10 04:45 PM



Ode To Seymour

A dragons flight in fairytale
A mystery tour where winds touch sail
A softly blown kiss at break of day
A wish that flutters come what may
If I can only breathe in this
My thoughts would know dreamer's bliss

I will feel contentment touching me
If I can roam in your country
Where candyfloss decorates the mind
And beneath a dragons wing I find
The sanctuary I've felt before
When I've walked the path to Seymour

Marsha

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 2002-10-10 04:48 PM


Nicely done Marsha....
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2 posted 2002-10-10 04:48 PM


I like this write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-10-10 04:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a special and heartwarming tribute to our wonderful wordsmith Seymour, sweet friend, he truly always takes us on fanciful dragon flights of joy, God Bless You Both, you both are such special friends to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-10-10 04:51 PM


OhSweetMusher~
He will  L O V E  it~

You have to go home now ...
the Library closes at 5 !
LOVE YOU and MISS YOU~
*Huggers*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
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5 posted 2002-10-10 04:53 PM


Lovely Ode, to one who knows.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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6 posted 2002-10-10 04:53 PM


Marsha, this is such a sweet tribute to Seymour. I know he will love it. You are such a nice person. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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7 posted 2002-10-10 05:01 PM


a lovely write, Marsha
sounds like you are still having a wonderful time...

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8 posted 2002-10-10 06:03 PM


A very beautiful tribute to an exceedingly talented, absolutely wonderful man. *S*

Gee... it sounds as though I'm talking about Toe!! LOL

You and Seymour are both dear friends... gifts from these blue pages I so very much appreciate. *S*

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-10-11 09:42 AM


Marsha,
We met in the blue and soared to the gold
One of us young and one of us old.
But fantasy has its own sort of truth
Like under your pillow your fist shed of tooth. May dreaming set a path of wonder
And place reality asunder.
Thank you for the lovely poem.

Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-10-12 11:53 PM


A lovely tribute to our own wise man....
and you wrote it so well and so true...

and Sy... I love the reply you wrote back to Marsha...
~ loving chipmunk hugs to both of you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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