Open Poetry #22 |
Through The Mist |
Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
He rests his head alongside my reflection, cloud watching; The spewing skyline edges along the vacant pasture, & across Octobers thoughts, curving uphill to stroke the ginger orb, awake. Blinking homes, with too many windows, revive, to coffee greetings, where chimneys echo, in burps of smoke that trail the powder sky, in vapours of tenderness. Dreams still lively within the minds eye of night skip along daybreak’s breath, reclining with contented ‘purrs’ in flicks of fur, that relax at my feet. Through the mist, the sequence swirls, lingering about the whispering shades of light, I turn my stare, and fall within the syrupy taste of reality. whilst he, still cloud watching, wishes he too, might drift the day away. S-G-K © 10/10/2002 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Samantha, A full palette and beautifully done. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well painted indeed... enjoyed the imagery and unfolding... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Would that we could all drift the day away. Less windows more introspection. A beautiful diversion. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Samantha, this was just beautiful...the thought and the poetry. Thanks for sharing. With Love To All, Ethel |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
thank you for the replies, and for sharing the day beginning with my cat storm, who is forever (like me) cloud watching Sammie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Samantha, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love the drifting feel of your voice in this, this brews inspiration like robust coffee in the morning, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Samantha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sam - very nicely written and told.... BC |
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