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The Depth of Your Sweet Caring
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The Depth of Your Sweet Caring |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I took your poem as of my own, A ~garment~ poem for me. It fit so well, custom-made, I tried it on for thee. I spun around, before I knew, it was an evening gown. I wish you could have seen me, a beauty of renown. A shimmering mist did fill the air as I whirled and twirled about. The only part of me to see, my eyes were peeking out. For your love just sparkled all around. with kindness, covered me. With the depth of your sweet caring and, the show of empathy. I spun round and round and round some more. Til I had shiny gossamer wings, I flew right up to heaven where all the angels sing. I saw Him just like that you see. "Not time for you to come home." Your healing comes from others and the precious ~garment~ poem. I floated back to where I was. Light as a feather, I was free. One thought of all that tenderness, and, no pain was haunting me. Seriously doubt**that poem was written, especially for me, but it sure had all the earmarks, of my tortured history. Now, if you poet, ever need -your pain- I'll slip on me, or try your ~garment poem~ yourself, it heals so magically. I'd like to give you more than this But that's all you required from me to feel your healing warmth, as sun and on the cutting edge of free. . . . . . . . . No matter who is was written for I thank the kind poet, from the depth and breath and heart of me. **Engaging Exodous by Ron Travis © 2002 without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-10-2002 05:35 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
the-loner-23..thank you. Although revised so far complete revision does not show. I wrote this poem last night in reference to a most touching poem I'd ever read. It is: Engaging Exodous, written by Ron Travis and posted here Oct. 8, which co-incidently is my real birthdate. What a fabulous gift to me. Life changing.  without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A most excellent write. We often aren't aware of how our poetry affects our readers. Well spoken! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you flatter me with such kind words...and I find your poem to indeed be touching. thank you for the very kind tribute...and for sharing your poem with us all. Ron |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and I can tell Ron loves it too as both of your wonderful words always inspire and grace all our hearts! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You Both, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Auguste: Your writing affects me quite often. Thanks for the comments. ....if there is no wind.....Oh, I love that.... Noah: thanks, you are too sweet. Cpat Hair: You are most welcome. And, I thank you, kind sir, for healing me with yours. A blessing I'll never forget. without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I thank you |
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