Open Poetry #22 |
The Woods of Erin |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'Twas in the Woods of Erin So many years ago, Some children gathered in a ring Or so the story goes. The forest was a mystical place Where fairies did abide, But never one, had they ever seen Because they'd always hide. They waited 'til the sun went down, Bright stars shone in the sky, Then suddenly, the night grew still And they heard a plaintiff cry. A little girl did venture To the spot from whence it came, She found the tiny leprechaun Who'd called out her name. The other children gathered 'round In total disbelief, They saw the tiny leprechaun Peek out from yonder leaf. One of the boys did ask him, "Where are all of the others?" "I've lost them all--my friends and folks, My sisters and my brothers!" "I was gathering dew from buttercups To make a spritely brew, When I realized I was all alone And knew not what to do." "I searched the woods from dawn to dusk, But nary a fairy did see, I fear Grimiltzkin has eaten them all And the only one left is me!" "Years ago the woods would ring With the joyous songs of elves, With sprites and fairies flitting about Our kingdom's coral bells." "You are so big and brave I see, Please carry me to yon' vale, By the light of the moon we'll find our way Down Grimiltzkin's trail. As the night wore on, they finally came To the evil ogre's cave, They heard the cries of wee wailing folk Whom they were about to save. They were locked up, in a cage you see, 'Twas of a monstrous scale, Hundreds of fairies imprisoned within, Filling Grimiltzkin Vale. Quietly they ventured forth, Grimiltzkin lay there snorin', They rolled a rock to block the cave, He roused and then he was roarin'! "Let me out and quick I say, I want my morning meal! I'll share with you my tasty treat, Now that's my only deal!" "Oh, no!" cried they, "You can't come out, There forevever you shall stay! We're freeing the fairies, elves and sprites, Erin Woods is their's today!" The leprechaun rejoined his friends, And his beloved family, They all joined in to sing a song Of thanks eternally. Once in the fairy kingdom, The children were in awe, Of the music and the gaiety And beauty that they saw. In this land of revelry, They wished to stay forever, The fairies, elves and sprites rejoiced, Their friends would leave them never! Years ago on a summer's eve, Some children followed their dream, And ventured into the woods at night, And since have not been seen! But when the moon is bright and full, The town's folk swear 'tis true, Their singing voices fill the woods Until the morning dew. 'Twas in the Woods of Erin, So many years ago, Some children gathered in a ring, Or so the the story goes. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-09-2002 02:33 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now I know of a lady Mysteria is her name, that loves all stories just like this, she captures them for fame! For she has two little young ones and tells them tales so wide! That they laugh, and cheer, and giggle, and stick close by her side! So I'm sharing this little bitty tale with Mysteria, so she'll see... another writer here in PiP who spins tales of fairies... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Good morning, Sunshine! Thank you for sharing with me that Mysteria writes about fairies and thank you again for your sharing with Mysteria, that I write about them as well! ~ Be careful not to step on any of the fairies that flit about! ~ Linda |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
absolutely delightful tale!!! almost all the rhythms are uniform and most of the rhymes lie quite wonderfully Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
VAS You obviously enjoyed it--and that pleases me greatly! Thank you for your enthusiastic reply! ~ May your day be full of the magic that the wee folk can bring! ~ EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I love lephrechauns so so much, this reminded me a little of Darby O'Gill and the Little People, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is such a wonderful story that will delight every little boy and girls heart as it does mine too, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, I knew that you would enjoy this poem I wrote about our friends in the Woods of Erin. Now that Grimiltzkin is imprisoned in the cave, I think it will be safe for us to go back and visit the fairy folk! ~ We could gather some dew in buttercups to bring back for our PIP friends! ~ Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh Linda, this is delightful. I loved it. The rhyme is perfect and the story just wonderful. Great job! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning RoseWhite! Glad you enjoyed! Heck, I'm glad that you took the time to read it--it is rather long! I was hoping anyone who dared read it, would get to the end of the poem before giving up! ~ The inner child in me says "Hello!" to the inner child in you! ~ EA |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Good story gal!!!!...Now, what was that wise remark about a mask?.....I'm really gonna scare the kids this year....I'm going to put on a pest control uniform and wear a Balladeer mask!!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Delightful Linda! I love the wee folks....hehe. Wonderful writing. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow.... Start writing kid's books! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe-- Thanx dear friend! You're not so bad at telling "stories" yourself! hehe P.S. I'm so pleased that you're taking the advice I gave in my reply to "A Toerag Halloween". I think it's wonderful that you have decided to wear a mask so you won't frighten the little children---and the fact that you will be wearing one in the likeness of Balladeer is even better! Make sure you buy lots of extra candy this year because the kids--and the women--will be eating right out of your hand! haha ---Just joking dear sweet Toe! On second thought, skip the mask and be your adorable self!!! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Donna-- Thank you for the "delightful" reply! ~ May the wee folks remove all the obstacles on your path in life! ~ Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mike-- Wow! Thanx for the "wow..."! Actually, I have written several books for children but I haven't submitted any of them to publishers as yet. I keep editing and reediting...but the day will come when I will be brave enough to send them out! Thank you for this little push. Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is wonderful, EA... you've told a great tale and told it well! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern-- Thank you, Ms. Southern Belle! EA |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
perhaps I should have you come over to tuck me in and tell me a bed time story!!! Consider yourself fuzzed |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I do believe I adored this. You're a wonderful story teller! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Fairies live here and there, throughout this home of mine. Some of them dress in rags, and others dress really fine. One thing they have in common is that they're all welcome here, for my darling granddaughter and I hold each one of them real dear. They hide underneath the chairs, and live in the plants you see. They come out and dance at night, they're not afraid of her or me. They light up her room with fairy dust, to keep all the nasty goblins away. She leaves them bits of goodies in her room so that they will stay. They eat up all the crumbs she leaves, and when she awakes each morn, we have to tip toe in the kitchen see, that's where baby fairies are born. They like it under the stove that's warm, so we leave them bits of fluff, hoping that when they spin blankets that we have left them enough. Oh yes we believe in fairies, and can't figure out those that do not, for if you have fairies in your heart Then a blessing you've surly got! ~*~ Oh, your timing is so good, she is coming for a sleepover today, and we shall use your story as a bedtime story tonight. I will email you her approval, as the wider the grin the higher the rating I adored this and into the fairy it book it goes with your name on it. Very, very well done, much better than I could ever hope to accomplish. Howdy Neighbour Sharon [This message has been edited by Mysteria (10-09-2002 02:08 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sharon, what is this little delight of wing doing unposted? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I just made it up in the submission box - started to make a note and poof a poem! LOL, you are a sweetie Mike. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
FFF--- Oh, yes, you are very welcomed in my home! I'll tuck you in safe and sound and I'll tell you as many bedtime stories as you'd like! P.S. Would you also like some hot cocoa and some of my home-baked cookies? See you soon! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Auguste-- You made me both chuckle and blush!--I like that ability in a man! tehe EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Well, I have had the most delightful time reading The Woods of Erin. Linda, I'll be over to join you and Noah on your adventures into the woods. Your imagination never ceases to amaze me. This is a keeper to be read to our nieces when they come to visit. And Sharon, you added your own fairy tale and it should be posted on it's own. It was delightful also. Hugs, Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mysteria-- Oh, my goodness! You've just blown me higher than my wings can usually take me! Your poem is wonderful and so close to my heart's essence. I'm so pleased that Sunshine got us connected! It would be an honor to have my poem added to your fairy book! Thank you for the compliment! Have a wonderful sleepover with your grandaughter and may she enjoy this poem as much as you seemed to have! Thank you again! You have really made my day even sweeter! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Marti-- It is an added thrill for me when I receive poems in my replies, or when lines of my poems are repeated in the replies, or when someone says it's a "keeper"! Thank you for the "keeper" thrill! Hugs to you! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mysteria--- I had not realized that you had composed that wonderful poem as you were writing your reply! I agree with Mike and Marti---you should post it! Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful...I Believe!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchantress-- You're absolutely adorable! Shhh! Don't tell my fairy friends, but you're even cuter than they are! Yes, I "believe" you are! ~ As Frank Sinatra used to sing, "Come fly with me"---through the faery kingdom! ~ Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Earth Angel - as I read this I could only think of one thing. And that is if you would read this story to me. I love its magical words, and the way you have described this... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ...and yes, I would love to read you this story. First I'd tuck you into bed, light a candle, turn out all the lights , play some of my enchanting music and fill my bedroom with the scent of jasmine...then read to you until you fell into a wonderful deep sleep filled with happy dreams. Good night BC! EA |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
And here I thought you wrote mostly tankas and such...Once again you amaze me!! I would encourage you to submit some of your children's books for publication. If this wonderful little (did I say little? ) ditty is anything to go by, you'll be as big a hit with them as you are with me!! Keep it up lady...your on a roll...or is that a leprechan??? Wishing you a fairy good evening!! Tammy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tammy-- What a pleasant, up-beat and witty reply! Thank you so very much! Linda |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
O woe is me. I read this, thought i hit the enter button on reply....but the wisdom tooth pain pills must be frogging my brain. *s* A truly impressive piece of prose and epic poetry, EarthA! You have raised the bar considerably high for anyone to achieve this level. JkF |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOOOHHHHH, Linda, you told me that you write children's books, but this is absolutely incredible. It made me want to go play, too....I am still a child at heart, too. I love this just as I do all of your work. You have such a sincere, sweet heart....and it's also playful.HEEHEE. Thanks for sharing this sweet story. With Love From Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JkF--- You're suffering from a wisdom tooth extraction and you managed to read this l-o-n-g poem---and make such a complimentary reply? Well, that certainly has started my day off on wonderful note! ~ Remember, that magical kingdom is only a thought away! ~ EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel--- Yes, I'm a playful Leo! I'm a very responsible person and have had to endure countless trials and tribulations in my life, but I still love to play, sing, romp about, and laugh! I try not to let life beat me down! I just make like the Energizer Bunny and keep on going and going... It's obvious to me that you are a playful person as well. Want to join me in a day of play? Thank you for such a sweet and generous reply! Linda |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This message is from Tori (my granddaughter) and she said I was to invite you for a sleepover I think you have her blessing that this was a keeper! LOL, she loved it. The pleasure is all ours to have you in the fairy book. When it is done I shall see you get a copy I have marked it down. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tori-- I would love to join you for a sleepover! And I'm so pleased that you enjoyed your grandma Mysteria, reading The Woods of Erin to you! Would you like me to read "The Leprechaun" when I come to the sleepover? Here's a sneak preview: /pip/Forum72/HTML/002880.html See you soon! Earth Angel |
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