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Open Poetry #22

Beside Me

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-10-09 09:44 AM

Not before me ...
     in any direction
        you are too far away.

        Nor behind me ...
     even by selection
it wouldn't be okay.

    Or beneath me ...
impossible to be
   but sometimes where we're found.

But beside me ...
     only by destiny
     with our souls tied and bound.

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-10-09 11:17 AM

I can't believe that no one has replied to this one yet!! It is so VERY wonderful!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-10-09 11:21 AM

I agree with Kris, this is incredible. Enjoyed!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2002-10-09 12:16 PM

Thank you both for your time and words ....
I may have involuntarily restricted comments to my work due to the time available to me to comment on others ....
but I know it was a worthwhile write when even one comment is made.
Again, thank you and glad you enjoyed.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-10-09 01:01 PM

I always add you to my library....
I love your words....they are never too far...from heart...

always......

ME~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

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