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I am / You are |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Am/You Are I am yin to your yang… the breath in your bubble… You are because to my why… the reflection in my eyes… I am tender curled fingers in your hand… You are solid beating of my heart… You are joy's ring in my bell… silver light in my eyes… I am a dream in your slumber… light's beacon on your shore… You are swift dare in my dreams… low lilt in my voice… I am warmth in your arms… You are why I know there is a God… and the reason for angels… source of my pride… bosom's swell of my heart… I am a horizon to your journey… your partner in life's dance… summer rain to your parched lips… You are the beam in my moon… I do not want to be, without You You want I, to make two, one I am yin to your yang… You are the because to my why… you are an ear to my whisper... ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 26 June 2000 revised 20 August 2002 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-20-2002 12:08 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I am an admirer of you I loved this one, Karilea... You and Nancy have really gotten my muse awakened now... She has been sleeping a lot lately, and so she and I both send you plenty of hugs This one is definitely a  Lyra |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Oh this is so tender and emotional ..very soft till I can feel it...wonderfully written love..thanks for sharing hugs, aloha Poetry is: |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I love the images you have put into this. You are a true romantic. I like that! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Karilea, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this is by far one of your best yet, I love it! (big hugggsssss) You speak of the essence of soulmates so well, sweet friend, God Bless You, and may you always be, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
IWIHWT!!! Tis truly amazing and honey this just gets put into that box of jewels........geez.......I can't even pick a favorite line. Very exceptional work Kari! somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Your're the cream in my coffee (true). |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is wonderful poetry. Enjoyed the flow of words and the thought. Very nice. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I must have missed this gem when it was first posted. I'm sorry for that and excited that you reposted such a beautiful piece. {sigh} Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Dang! Oh Karilea!! You have no idea...oh yes you do too..  My my how I love this little treasure! OH Wow! ~Hugs YOU!~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh no!! Another favourite!! Karilea, this is simply perfect and library bound. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Soft lullaby summer rhythm. As patterns seem to form |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Absolutely beautiful Sunshine! |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
IMPRESSIVE!! Keep counting your blessings |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like a perfect match! good piece! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I read this poem very slowly--very deliberately. I didn't want to miss a thing. Each line grabbed me and flooded my mind and my soul with images so beautiful, so poignant...so...Excuse me, I've drifted off with the memory of your words again! I don't think I have to say "I love it!" You know that I do! Linda |
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