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0 posted 2002-10-08 07:01 PM


Slate grey sky
Cold rain falling down
Hiding the tears

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1 posted 2002-10-08 07:02 PM


I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-10-08 07:03 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Robert, I know this feeling all too well, sweet friend, I hope all is alright now and these tears have escaped your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-10-08 07:19 PM


Searching for only
one clear puddle, I'll find my
rain-drenched reflection...

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4 posted 2002-10-08 07:24 PM


Thank you for the seynru.You sould writ more of them.

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5 posted 2002-10-08 07:37 PM



gray's white light
deeper than the rain
thunder's sane

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