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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-07 08:30 PM

The sun sets to the east slowly
It drifts slower and slower
Behind the trees
The pink and orange and reds
Are in the sky
As it gets darker and darker
The sun reflects off the lake
As it goes down
And it disappears
Behind the mountain

Cold hands means a warm heart

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

1 posted 2002-10-07 08:33 PM

Beautiful, I can close my eyes and see the sunset.
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2002-10-07 08:40 PM

Very lovely.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-10-07 10:06 PM

I love sunsets and you painted a very beautiful one in my minds eye. Thank you.

Ethel

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-10-07 10:54 PM

the peacefullness of this flows through my mind

very nicely done

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2002-10-08 12:18 PM

sunsets are lovely especially with different hues painting in the sky after a rainfall..enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-10-08 03:48 AM

Sounds like an experience...James

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-10-08 10:20 PM

(smiles) This is so beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, now that I get up at 5:30 every mnorning to go to Boulder for my classes, I am blessed to see the sherbet colors on the horizon every dawn! (big hugggsssss) Beautifully colorful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2002-10-08 10:32 PM

I have spot...special place...I go in the summer to watch the sunset...this poem took me back there tonight...thank you...

...believe what your heart feels.....

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-10-09 06:24 PM

Beautiful brush strokes you used to paint this lovely scenery, Julie...
Lovely imagery

~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2002-10-09 06:56 PM

these words are as beautiful as a sunset is itself. Well done Julie.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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