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Open Poetry #22

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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-07 12:02 PM

It's quiet, light is dim
the candle has burned
to the quick, and flickers
with no dance upon wall.
Faint surround, that's all.

The small crystal orb gifted
filled with red liquid
that burns of fire
also illuminates

slightly

slightly

the space that
I am in. Scent of
lilac and jasmine
with vanilla tease
upon air is now
an aura, and a gentle
caress of smell.

In this moment, my sigh
escapes, in time, caught
felt, sent upon air
relax of mind ensues.

pause

reflect

renew.

WhiteRose 10/06/02

"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

1 posted 2002-10-07 12:05 PM

Oh yes, I do like this.
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pause

reflect

renew.
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Especially, this part.
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

2 posted 2002-10-07 12:09 PM

ahhh yes Pause reflect renew...I am right there and the muse knows it...you wrote a delightful poem, dear one.
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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