Open Poetry #22 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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I used to be Republican and then they stopped my check so I went down to Social Security to remind them that I voted The straight ticket every time And? It was a good day there. There was no one else in line or even waiting in the chairs. So I walked up to the sleeping clerk. She didn’t even open her eyes but said “you have to take a number” and I had to tell my self in mind TWICE to shut my open jaw that’s how dumbfounded I was there was no one else around— I thought for sure it was a joke, (surely Allen Funt’s around) But no, she opened eyes to nod toward a paper roll of print And so I thought: “Ooooo-kay, I’ll play” and ripped the number 86 from its perforation and walked up proudly with my kill. But NO-- “wait behind the red line please” (Oh yeah, it was getting better) So I played along again. I stood there with an innocence painted over my pained face And then? She put some lotion on her hands and never blinked called, “86!” And so I won the lottery, I jumped and screamed, “YES! That’s ME!” And turned around to face no one in the eye and said, “It’s my lucky day!” * * * note: totally true story--oh except for the part about the check...I just threw the Republican bit in to tick off my brother...wicked me ![]() [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-06-2002 02:23 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Serene One...there's always that red tape.... and on this end of the line? One huge grin! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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Grinnin right along with Karilea.....you go get em Karen......love it. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
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too bad there wasn't someone else in line, someone to write about . . . |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Serenity, I love the way you take "life" and write so expertly about it. I hate lines, too...sometimes....At other times I like to watch and listen, while I'm waiting. Can learn a lot that way. But, I do hate people to make me "wait in line" whenever there IS no line...Thanks Ethel...garysgirl |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
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I should buy a red-striped suit (lots of lines), so no one can ever cross me again without first signing forms in triplicate. Yep, I'm not making sense. ![]() (D) |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thanks for the laugh, Karen...and the commentary...much enjoyed. Now, I'm off to brave the lines at LAX. Wish me luck! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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thanks to all--but Krawdaddy? you are so astute-- ![]() |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
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hahaha excellent stuff m'dear. You crack me up. hugs luscious. Maree |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
I loved this, great writing and it gave me some chuckles. caterina |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Believe me, I can just picture you doing that! ![]() ![]() |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Allen Funt would have been proud to see you win..enjoyed the humor..continue winning ![]() |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
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![]() Kielo I need to change my signature. :D |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Thank you (curtsy) you people are wonderful! ![]() |
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