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scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

0 posted 2002-10-06 09:22 AM

Let Me

Let me touch you...
Let me reach your soul...
Let me hear your anticipation grow...
Let me make you feel loved and whole...
Let me please and tease you...
Let me love...You.

...believe what your heart feels.....

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-10-06 09:31 AM

I am impressed! I truly am!

Well done Scorpion!

EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-10-06 09:33 AM

Very loving..very sensual Scorpio.
Words a woman long to hear...
"Let me please and tease you...
Let me love...You."
So much said..with so few words.
Love this...I really do.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-10-06 10:19 AM

Scorpio, this poem of yours comes from the heart...as I for one love to use ellipses, and probably overuse them [I have been so accused...LOL] but for me, they draw on one's mind the tenuous feel of lingering thought...which you have done here, and very well [in my mind...]

Thank you for this!

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

4 posted 2002-10-06 10:25 AM

Few words. Says all. Well done.

Thanks,
Melton

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

5 posted 2002-10-06 10:26 AM

O please!
pretty please ?
any way
a nice poem
arthur

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

6 posted 2002-10-06 11:27 AM

Words that women want to hear.Deliver them with sad,moist "puppy dog" eyes.It melts them every time.

paladin

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

7 posted 2002-10-06 12:00 PM

Thank you...all of your comments are greatly appreciated...it's not easy to put these thoughts on view...but I want the person who inspired them to know how very special she is to me...her love sustains me...she is my muse..again thanks Earth Angel, Enchantress, Sunshine, 2dalimit, Arthur and Paladin...

...believe what your heart feels.....

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-10-06 01:36 PM

Very heartfelt write scorpio. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-10-06 01:48 PM

Scorpio, I loved your poem
and the way you centered
it, too. Sounds like you
have a very good inspiration
in your loved one. I know
how
it feels...GOOOODDD, Huh?
Thanks for sharing.

Best wishes,
Ethel...garysgirl

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2002-10-06 02:36 PM

Chris...it is very heart felt...
and Ethel...you are so right...it feels so goooooood!!!

...believe what your heart feels.....

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

11 posted 2002-10-06 04:26 PM

Scorpio - offerings of love that reveal so much - thanks for a view into your heart - Paul

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