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hexrain New Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 4 |
Sinking I am sinking down Slowly Into solitude You cannot understand my pain It hurts me To see you kill yourself slowly We could be good for each other But you will not have it So here I will remain By your side Like duckling to it's mother I will seek shelter under your wing Until you are gone No one's fault but your own And I will be alone Sinking |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Welcome to Passions, hexrain!! It's good to have you here!! I enjoyed your first post quite a lot. I hope to see more of your work soon!!  Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A painful write, but enjoyed. Welcome to Passions!! Have fun here!! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Welcome! your first post is very touching and sad. I hope to see more of your posts soon aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I love to read first posts. It's always interesting to see what a person posts first and to see what they follow with. But then I don't spend much time here anymore, so I'm glad I caught this piece here. ======================================= I will seek shelter under your wing. ======================================= This was my favorite line. Very touching amongst all the sorrow. Of course that only makes it sadder. Keep posting and hopefully I'll catch you the next time I visit Passions. Welcome! ~Krissie "No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nicely done. Welcome to Pips! You can always seek shelter in here. |
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hexrain New Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 4 |
Thanks for all your responses guys it means a lot to me... i will definately keep posting some more stuff here. i'll try not to make all of it so sad from now on |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
hexrain, say what your heart feels, that is where the ebst poetry comes from enjoyed and welcome El riesgo vive siempre! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A strong and aching feeling to this write, came forth in a powerful presentation. Difficult to love someone lost to themselves. Welcome to Passions. You are among good friends, and good poets. A place to set your deepest thoughts to pen, and know they are safely regarded. ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 this was sinking. Welcome, again. Write what you feel. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Well done first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) You have come to th right place, sweet friend, here we all share tears and sympathies to one another and know with all our hearts we will only rise and never sink lower! This is a powerfully touching debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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