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Did You Live?
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Did You Live? |
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DaMusicMan Junior Member
since 2002-10-03
Posts 18Virginia, United States |
Finally you care Finally your world’s disappeared Finally your life is done Finally your goals are achieved But what if… You never achieved your goals You never got to express yourself You never graduated You never took your first step You never told your mom you loved her If so, how did you live? How was your life interesting? And you thought life after death Actually happened. Once you’re dead, You’re dead - for life. So I ask you this in all respect Did you live?? - Errick |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
In summing up one's life, another measure of it's success, or failure to succeed, is how one's life has affected others. Very thought-provoking. EA |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Errick- Again this is an awesome poem. and i think the answer to the question is no! |
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