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RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2002-10-05 11:57 AM

This autumn's eve whose light allowed
detached surveillance in a crowd
a single form of subtle grace
so pleasing memory can't erase.

The stars aligned us in that space
kismet would find us face to face
and though I swore no more Loves pull
you blushed when called adorable.

Such pure response, so innocent
to quite a virgin compliment
though offered with such ease it placed
a hint of rose on me too traced.

The more I watched that more seemed chaste
so sipped mine eyes acquired taste
as soothing an inebriate
as any cause to celebrate.

A timid courage mustered me
to lead you to my poetry
now I await cette jeune fille belle
write Poetwells@aol

(and pray forgive my doggerel
though written quick it is no bull)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-10-05 12:14 PM

RSWells
Cute end, well done, enjoyed the read.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-10-05 01:30 PM

Wonderful write and a pleasure to read. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-10-05 02:44 PM

*smiling at your "cette jeune fille belle" sincerety...
youre at your best when rhyming...
so cool to see anticipation in your pen again poet sir

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

4 posted 2002-10-05 03:13 PM

Unbelievable, the irony of your timing. A most hopeful write.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-10-05 03:46 PM

..."Poetwells@aol"...did I copy that down correctly? tehe

EA

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-10-05 04:03 PM

Welcome home, Richard...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-10-05 04:15 PM

Now what was that email addy again?
Love this Richard!!
You see...you used my favourite word..KISMET!!
Very very nice and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2002-10-05 06:40 PM

well hmmmmmmmmmmmmm poet's addy.............

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2002-10-05 08:08 PM

Richard

The fact that I enjoyed this delightful poem has nothing to do with the fact that I'm a virgo.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2002-10-06 05:19 AM

Richard, I loved your poem. You make music with your words, too, kind sir. There are lots of musicians here, huh? I "hear" music often, here. I love this site and this wonderful "family of friends". I hope to read more of your "music", Richard. Thank you for sharing.
With love to all from Ethel/garysgirl

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2002-10-07 02:53 AM

Ahhh, I sit here smiling a very big smile indeed.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

12 posted 2002-10-07 12:17 PM

You need to watch out for those Virgos, Sir. I have heard that they can be quite tricky.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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