Open Poetry #22 |
Harvest Moon |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
My heart sways slowly to your tender love Like amber grains dancing on wind The harvest moonlight shines soft from your eyes Don't blink, love, please don't let this end A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Oh Kristopher, this is so beautifully sentimental, sweet friend, I wish for true loves bliss to always fill your heart and make you happy forever! (sigh)This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah very nicely penned Kris! Love this unique style of yours. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was the most romantic thing I have read in a while, and would I ever like a bracelet with that on it Lovely! The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very nice.... gotta love romance in the moonlight ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very good ... and I've never heard of a heart made analgous to wheat ... unique Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is incredibly, I mean INCREDIBLY romantic. Your loving and gentle nature comes shining through in this poem. Linda |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I remember dancing under a harvest moon. It seems so long ago. Well said, Kris. Sandra |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
lovely images. enjoyed. Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich W. Nietzsche |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Take a bow, man! Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Madden.... great quote. Once read it on a fantastic book detailing the profession of chasing serial killers, of profiling them - by the man credited with inventing the very business of profiling, and the phrase 'serial killer.' Once again, great quote. Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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