Open Poetry #22 |
Food poisoning |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
After many years In restaurants And preparing Countless meals I know well The difference Between unappetizing And unhealthy A dish can look, smell And even taste Like a work of art Yet still conceal A host of toxins And a meal Made in a wholesome And nutritious manner Can appear Quite uninteresting So, I can only say In hindsight That she was very Appealing ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
in HINDSIGHT she was very appealing? *chuckle* you DO have a way with words Ed...love your subtle sense of wry... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You are a great wordchef. so I guess it pays to be careful about what you put on your plate? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes kacy, and....not to be gluttonous, Thanks witch ~Ed |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
EdEd ED you got to stop twisting the knife so forcefully jeesus this is Wranx b |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...what Brian said... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Ahhhh, that deadly urge to splurge! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
On Tuesday, I ate a chicken salad sandwich that I bought in our cafeteria. Within a few hours I was doubled over in pain! And thus came the food poisoning. Somehow reading this eases the memory! Though we can heal from 'food' poisoning, it's harder to get over the kind of food poisoning you write about here. I enjoyed it very much. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well written and enjoyed!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Damn, I love this turned apple. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) I have read this three times now and can draw a different story from each... nice use of word here... twisted slowly back upon itself... enjoyed! |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
GREAT-THANKS! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
LMAO yep yep yep i HEAR that |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Nodding and smiling at you, too good, just too good. hehe The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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