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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-04 07:10 PM



It was not for the token gift of love
that I added to my meager existence
by placing you in the middle of the collage.

Not at all. It was only for the aesthetic
value you presented. A perfect compliment
to the soft, passionate woman that I am.

You neither clash with my life, nor go along.
You simply, with your vague persona
balance the scale of my world.

WhiteRose 10/04/02

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-04 07:27 PM


Wow Anne....this is powerful....very softly
said...so serene...yet a very strong
ending...

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-10-04 10:07 PM


Thank you Barry, your comments are greatly appreciated.
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