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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-10-04 07:10 PM

A mountain’s spring, chilling and clear
flowing through an endless gorge.
Reminding me of your love...
Of you, my dear.

For in the waters pure... passion runs
over the rocks of life meandering
into an ocean of memories...

As fires of desire glimmer the sands
of our walk...side by side...

Forest fauna and flora dot the
places we have rested....
Breaking the bread...
Sharing the wine of lips in taste...

And....
As I dream of wondrous stars,
endless horizons...shimmering sets
of our sun....

I smile as each moon rises
upon the wane
of light’s day....holding you..
Sharing sighs as I trace
the winding roads
of your essence...

caterina
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 188
Canada

1 posted 2002-10-04 07:23 PM

I have been there, so this poem speaks to me. I truly enjoyed this.

thankyou, caterina

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-10-04 07:37 PM

A beautiful remembrance in the today of love.
All best wishes always. ThisDiamond

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-10-04 07:58 PM

For in the waters pure... passion runs
over the rocks of life meandering
into an ocean of memories...

Magnus - beautiful symphony of words here. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-10-04 08:06 PM

Barry

To love through time is something not many can achieve, not with the degree of ardor that you show here...your words are beautiful!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-04 08:39 PM

Magnus, I love this poem. You have to have known a "true love" to send forth such flowing words of love. Thanks for sharing. Best Wishes From Ethel...garysgirl

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-10-04 08:51 PM

Very very beautiful Barry....timeless love.
..what we all dream of.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-10-04 10:04 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may on the winding road of life your Juliet bade you with the moons boon of eternal joy! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2002-10-04 10:18 PM

..."sharing sighs"---my, my, my he does get around--and he looks so innocent and noble! tehe

On a more serious note, this is the stuff of which romantic love is made!

Lovely, Barry, simply lovely!

Linda

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

9 posted 2002-10-05 01:16 PM

This does reveal the passionate heart of the poet, Barry.
and as always , it is eloquent in expression.
much enjoyed
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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